HAY MAGIC~ <3 so Vision: Very good ;u; the character is so cute!!
Originality: Pretty original~
Technique: All righty. First of all, you should have made the dock thing more "flat", because it looks like it's raised, and instead of being flat, it looks like it's leading upwards. Also, the dock edge thing(the darker colored part), it looks like it's a small log at the edge of the dock, instead of being an edge, due to the way the character is holding on to it. Otherwise, water is very good, and is that a fishy I see in there? 8D oh wait no it's the char's reflection :I and the water underneath the dock should be much darker, and you should put white reflections on the water. ;u;
Impact: Good ;U; it's very nice, and I can tell the char is concentrating hard on fishing x333
GOOD JOB AS ALWAYS, MAGIC~ <333333 Love, rainfreezer 8D
I have kept the perspective of the docks you made. That version is in birdperspective, you see the drawing from "Above". That way you cannot see the horizont when its this close. So ive just extended the water, and added some lilys so it wouldnt be so empty. It works very well like that. I also added some lines to fix up the anatomy slightly so it feels like the character is resting more on the area its laying.
In the second picture
I wanted to keep your horizont background to show you how the docks would have looked like if they it was there. All perspective dissapears into the horizont. so the docks would do that. Now you get the feeling the docks are far away aswell.
Hope it helps ^^ and keep in mind were the sun is coming from and add that to the clouds aswell So you dont end up with two suns.