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Where Did All The Fish Go? by Magicpawed Where Did All The Fish Go? by Magicpawed
Look what I drew eee

Full picture (800 point) Commission for :iconcibtus-rwb:

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haha boring colors, I know, but I liked them


Enjoy <3

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HAY MAGIC~ <3
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Vision: Very good ;u; the character is so cute!!

Originality: Pretty original~

Technique: All righty. First of all, you should have made the dock thing more "flat", because it looks like it's raised, and instead of being flat, it looks like it's leading upwards. Also, the dock edge thing(the darker colored part), it looks like it's a small log at the edge of the dock, instead of being an edge, due to the way the character is holding on to it. Otherwise, water is very good, and is that a fishy I see in there? 8D oh wait no it's the char's reflection :I and the water underneath the dock should be much darker, and you should put white reflections on the water. ;u;

Impact: Good ;U; it's very nice, and I can tell the char is concentrating hard on fishing x333

GOOD JOB AS ALWAYS, MAGIC~
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Love, rainfreezer 8D
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Wow! I love this artwork, Magicpawed! You certainly put a lot of effort into this!

I love the style you used on the character. It is simple but very cute and effective. The fishing rod is also very clever.

The background is a little off, though. instead of having the mountains and the sky, it should have been all water, for atonamy reasons. It looks like the dock is floating on one end.

Speaking about the dock, I am in love with the technique you used for the wood! I have to say, I'm very impressed!

Overall, I think that this is a very good piece. Well done, Magicpawed!
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TheGreatStarfire Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, good job! I love how you're trying to mix up your style!
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Magicpawed Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha yea! This is pretty old though
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TheGreatStarfire Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's okay. :)
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LugiaUmbreonPower Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Nice~ ^^
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interesting-qouta Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Can I ask you what kind of brush you used when doing the water to give that realistic effect? And if so, what program and setting?
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cottoncritter Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very pretty <3 I'm glad to see some more beachy art before Autumn settles in~
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freezekitteh Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this reminds me of DOGZ 2. I'm gonna go play that game now...
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griffsnuff Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Hey! This piece is really cute, but I thought I might help you with why the background doesnt work ^^ Heres two versions Ive done for this picture

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In the first picture

I have kept the perspective of the docks you made. That version is in birdperspective, you see the drawing from "Above". That way you cannot see the horizont when its this close. So ive just extended the water, and added some lilys so it wouldnt be so empty. It works very well like that. I also added some lines to fix up the anatomy slightly so it feels like the character is resting more on the area its laying.

In the second picture

I wanted to keep your horizont background to show you how the docks would have looked like if they it was there. All perspective dissapears into the horizont. so the docks would do that. Now you get the feeling the docks are far away aswell.

Hope it helps ^^ and keep in mind were the sun is coming from and add that to the clouds aswell :D So you dont end up with two suns.
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Magicpawed Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! I really love the top on and I've actually been working on a way to make it work since it's in almost every single critique haha
This is really helpful <3
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makashy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
That's really a cute drawing,the only thing i'd change is the line around the irids of the character!Anyway,Great Job!!
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